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Flicky Short
Topic Started: Sunday Sep 10 2017, 04:12 PM (116 Views)
BarnarnarBunny
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I've done a rough animation of an idea I had for a Flicky short. You can watch it here

Obviously I'll redraw everything to make it look prettier and that, but I'm not really sure whether it's really that funny.

Any feedback will be greatly appreciated!
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*Update*
I decided to redo the animation, and I think this one is a bit more funnier (though I'm not great at judging humour so sorry if it's not). You can check it out here

Again, it'll look much prettier and have sound later on.
Edited by BarnarnarBunny, Sunday Sep 10 2017, 07:48 PM.
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I like both concepts, actually. They're at least 'giggly' funny and get straight to the point.

You could even use the second and first short to create one whole piece if you wanted to. Just start with the second clip, cut to the first short (kinda like a time skip) and just add in Flicky taking a big step back to dodge before he watches the madness unfold. Otherwise you could pick either of these and go with it. Just seems like a waste to use one but not the other. :P

I'm curious to see what you can do with this, actually. Keep up the effort!
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Thanks! :P
I'll probably merge them into one short. I actually quite like what you've suggested. It kinda reminds me of the roadrunner cartoon. I'll see what I can do!
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