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| BarnarnarBunny | Sunday Sep 10 2017, 04:12 PM Post #1 |
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I've done a rough animation of an idea I had for a Flicky short. You can watch it here Obviously I'll redraw everything to make it look prettier and that, but I'm not really sure whether it's really that funny. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated! ----------------------------------------------------------------- *Update* I decided to redo the animation, and I think this one is a bit more funnier (though I'm not great at judging humour so sorry if it's not). You can check it out here Again, it'll look much prettier and have sound later on. ----------------------------------------------------------------- *Update* (8-3-2018) So, it's been a while... Anyway, I've decided to "revive" this short again. Though it's quite a bit different this time around, and hopefully funnier too. You can check it out here It's only a rough storyboard, so things can easily be changed. I'm actually thinking of changing the robot to something else, but not too sure what yet. Any feedback will be awesome! ----------------------------------------------------------------- *Update* (12-3-2018) Just updated the animation a bit. Nothing major but I think it works better ![]() You can check it out here Edited by BarnarnarBunny, Sunday Mar 11 2018, 07:49 PM.
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| Whitesonic | Tuesday Sep 12 2017, 03:13 AM Post #2 |
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I like both concepts, actually. They're at least 'giggly' funny and get straight to the point. You could even use the second and first short to create one whole piece if you wanted to. Just start with the second clip, cut to the first short (kinda like a time skip) and just add in Flicky taking a big step back to dodge before he watches the madness unfold. Otherwise you could pick either of these and go with it. Just seems like a waste to use one but not the other. ![]() I'm curious to see what you can do with this, actually. Keep up the effort! |
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| BarnarnarBunny | Wednesday Sep 13 2017, 08:20 AM Post #3 |
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Thanks! I'll probably merge them into one short. I actually quite like what you've suggested. It kinda reminds me of the roadrunner cartoon. I'll see what I can do! |
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| BarnarnarBunny | Sunday Mar 11 2018, 08:03 PM Post #4 |
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I understand the community is against double posting, but I'm replying to this thread to show that I have recently continued working on this short; people probably assume that I'm no longer working on this since the last reply before this one was back in September 2017 (yeah... it's been a while). My absence is simply down to having very little time to work on personal projects as I study at university, meaning I have to prioritise my work over things I want to do for fun. I hope you understand. Anyways, you can check out the newest version (12-3-2018) of the short here |
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