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| Sergeant 16-Bit | Thursday Feb 2 2017, 07:10 PM Post #1 |
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Yes, I'm still working on my Alex Kidd Short. In the mean time, I'd like to know what you guys think about this other prototype I have. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DlCn98rQ6EA&feature=youtu.be |
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| The Wax | Saturday Feb 4 2017, 07:19 PM Post #2 |
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This one works but I feel the script needs some expanding. They could be having a serious talk but the text bubbles keep saying funny things and eventually they interrupt their talking and yell at the screen. Maybe have a mustache or dunce cap get drawn on him as well. |
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| Sergeant 16-Bit | Monday Feb 13 2017, 12:17 PM Post #3 |
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Here's an updated version of my prototype. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smLzNxnw6FU |
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| The Wax | Tuesday Feb 21 2017, 02:08 AM Post #4 |
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Getting a "This video is unavailable." |
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| Sergeant 16-Bit | Tuesday Feb 21 2017, 11:42 AM Post #5 |
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Whoops! Accidentally set the video to "private" instead of "unlisted". It should be working now. |
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| The Wax | Tuesday Feb 21 2017, 07:25 PM Post #6 |
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That was a nice improvement. I say go ahead and make a full version.
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| KaDoYuu | Tuesday Feb 21 2017, 10:06 PM Post #7 |
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I like the staging and timing with this version. I'd just suggest background music to make the spaces between dialogue less noticeable. Please, fully animate this! |
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| Sergeant 16-Bit | Friday Feb 24 2017, 04:34 PM Post #8 |
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Alrighty then, I'll go ahead and start in-betweening after I finish this animated GIF I was working on. Also, I managed to get word back from Mystic Pyro Freak on the possibility of voicing Alissa.
Edited by Sergeant 16-Bit, Friday Feb 24 2017, 04:38 PM.
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| Sergeant 16-Bit | Monday Mar 20 2017, 07:07 AM Post #9 |
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Quick Update Since it's been a while, I should probably let you guys know that it's taking a while to get word back from Mystic Pyro Freak, my voice for Alyssa. |
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