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Comix Zone Short
Topic Started: Thursday Feb 2 2017, 07:10 PM (881 Views)
Sergeant 16-Bit
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Yes, I'm still working on my Alex Kidd Short.

In the mean time, I'd like to know what you guys think about this other prototype I have.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DlCn98rQ6EA&feature=youtu.be
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This one works but I feel the script needs some expanding. They could be having a serious talk but the text bubbles keep saying funny things and eventually they interrupt their talking and yell at the screen. Maybe have a mustache or dunce cap get drawn on him as well.
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Here's an updated version of my prototype.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=smLzNxnw6FU
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Getting a "This video is unavailable."
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Tuesday Feb 21 2017, 02:08 AM
Getting a "This video is unavailable."
Whoops! Accidentally set the video to "private" instead of "unlisted". It should be working now.
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That was a nice improvement. I say go ahead and make a full version. :)
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I like the staging and timing with this version. I'd just suggest background music to make the spaces between dialogue less noticeable. Please, fully animate this!
Stay inspired!
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Alrighty then, I'll go ahead and start in-betweening after I finish this animated GIF I was working on. Also, I managed to get word back from Mystic Pyro Freak on the possibility of voicing Alissa.
Edited by Sergeant 16-Bit, Friday Feb 24 2017, 04:38 PM.
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Quick Update

Since it's been a while, I should probably let you guys know that it's taking a while to get word back from Mystic Pyro Freak, my voice for Alyssa.
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