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| Tweet Topic Started: Sunday Feb 22 2015, 11:23 PM (2,188 Views) | |
| Rockman | Sunday Feb 22 2015, 11:23 PM Post #1 |
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I'm not dead ;u;
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Draft 1 (Epilepsy Warning):http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/e5252df7edd3eed77a23a71bdca4bff8 I have finally gotten animation software. It's Anime Studio Debut 9. I am not an expert with it, however. This short is far from done. It needs background improvement, voices, music, and other goodies. EDIT: Draft 2 is finished. Draft 2: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/d2c9bf42455d77e423a5fa56125f5f9d Newgrounds, sadly, got rid of the shading effects and the audio. The audio: Ecco: The Tides of Time - Title Theme Tell me what you think of the current version. Edited by Rockman, Tuesday Feb 24 2015, 03:59 PM.
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I once did Carnival Night Act 2 in 6:43 and felt like a god because of it. And then I found a shortcut and did it in 4:05. Now I AM a god. | |
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| Sonicyay2 | Monday Feb 23 2015, 10:54 AM Post #2 |
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I'm Sonicyay2
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It's good.......for a start...... ALSO SEIZURE WARNING |
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Don't you dare call me Sonicgay, OR ELSE... I make half-decent Stickman animations. You might like them. Oh, I also like Sonic, Mario, Powerpuff Girls, Sonic, Sonic, SpongeBob, and Sonic. Did I mention Sonic? | |
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| Rockman | Tuesday Feb 24 2015, 03:56 PM Post #3 |
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I'm not dead ;u;
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I finished Draft 2. |
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I once did Carnival Night Act 2 in 6:43 and felt like a god because of it. And then I found a shortcut and did it in 4:05. Now I AM a god. | |
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| YoungSilver | Wednesday Feb 25 2015, 08:26 PM Post #4 |
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Young Silver
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That was funny, the screen was flashing like crazy! He jumps high and his friends ran:3 Lol:3 I feel sorry for those who were in the sea. |
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| #sonicfan917 | Wednesday Feb 25 2015, 10:19 PM Post #5 |
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Still nead to learn how to edit
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| Rockman | Wednesday Feb 25 2015, 10:22 PM Post #6 |
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I'm not dead ;u;
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What do I need to fix in draft 2? I need to add voice acting and my own backgrounds, but that's all I can think of....
Edited by Rockman, Wednesday Feb 25 2015, 10:23 PM.
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I once did Carnival Night Act 2 in 6:43 and felt like a god because of it. And then I found a shortcut and did it in 4:05. Now I AM a god. | |
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| halo | Monday Mar 9 2015, 12:03 PM Post #7 |
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Idea strikes. Genius ensues.
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The part where the dolphin first flies off looked better in the first version, it's too slow in the second. The background appears to be pre-made and I'd ask that you draw your own background for the sake of originality. Also, it isn't entirely clear what's happening with the whole vortex thing in the sky, maybe add some more debris flying around and have a visible pattern of motion instead of things just spazzing out everywhere. Also, try to think of something other than "what could possibly go.."; it's a very weak transition and feels completely out of context. You can add sound effects and music to help it along, but I'd hold off on voice acting until the dialog is a bit more solid. |
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| Rockman | Monday Mar 30 2015, 08:49 PM Post #8 |
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I'm not dead ;u;
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Yeah, that sounds right... As for "What could possibly go...," I forgot to squeeze the word "wrong" in there. And I originally had the Stage 1 theme from the Tides of Time attached to it. Newgrounds got rid of it, however... |
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I once did Carnival Night Act 2 in 6:43 and felt like a god because of it. And then I found a shortcut and did it in 4:05. Now I AM a god. | |
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