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Topic Started: Saturday Aug 24 2013, 04:04 PM (53,063 Views)
DylthemanA
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Just posting to say. My project is done (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_KGbvPi7Bok) and i hope to have my shorts done in about a week. One already written but anyone got a good idea for a Ristar short just wondering (if not ill make up something myself)
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I hope you like this Space Channel 5 part 2 short.

[Ulala is dancing againts the leader of The Rytm Roges at the begining of level 1.]

The leader of The Rytm Roges: Up Up Up

Ulala: Up Up Up

The leader of The Rytm Roges: Oh, thats it Ulala, no more mister nice guy. Up Down Chu Hey Chu Hey Hey Up Right Left Chu Hey Right Right Left Up Down Chu Hey Up Down.

Ulala: Up ... Down uhhhh. [The rythm roges kill Ulala because she couldn't remember the dance moves.]

Fuse: Ulala noooooo!

[Purge appers on a flying TV screen (like he usually does)]

Purge: Sooo..., how is it going? Did you win?

The Leader of The Rythm Roges: See for your self.

[Purge sees the dead Ulala]

Purge: You idiout, why did you kill her?

The leader of The Rytm Roges: You told me to defeat her in a dance battle.

Purge: Yes, but not to kill her! We need her dance energy for the Balistic Grove Gun.

The leader of The Rytm Roges: You wanted her only for her dane enegry?! Why dindn‘t you use my, or your dance energy?! Or why didn‘t you use electrisity, like normal people?!

Purge: Uhhhh ... well. [A thought bubble appers above Purge, where he is shown sintting in a classrom.] [Dr.Eggman comes into the class room]

Eggman: Hello class I am Dr.Eggman and I will be teaching you how to be evil. Today we are going to talk about the most important rule in being evil, you must have a plan to take over the world, but the plan must have a major weak point so that someone can foil it. Now…

[The thought bubble dissaprs]

Purge: I knew i shoudn‘t take lessons from Eggman.

Let me know what you think.
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While I'm super happy to see someone else who knows who Mr. Bones and Astal are here, most of these ideas are really lacking a punchline, and others are essentially jokes that have been done before and don't yet have something "unique" enough to set them apart. Check out the ideas guide I made with Smegerama here: http://sonicparadox.net/topic/6729620/1/

It'll help you to refine at least ONE of those ideas into a winner.
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Wednesday Sep 11 2013, 12:07 AM
Alright, another wannbe writer pitching ideas here.

1) Vectorman sneaks into Ulala bathroom, transforms into a shower nozzle, scene cuts to Ulala showering with a close up of a happy vectorman shower nozzle. I figure a pervy vectorman could be a running gag with his ability to transform into objects.

2)The rise and fall of Alex Kidd. It starts in 1980s when Alex Kidd is made the official mascot of Sega, cue montage of him partying, driving fast cars with hot chicks, and (if permissible given this is the 80s) doing blow followed by a blimp that says "The world is yours"(ala scarface).
Then comes 1990 when the heads of Sega break the bad news that he is being replaced by some new hot shot. They unhook the curtain to reveal Sonic. The scene ends depressingly with Alex holding a box with all of his stuff as he leaves Sega for an unemployment office across the street.

3)Burning Rangers enter a building on fire only to find a woman on fire on which they shoot her with their lasers thus turning her into a crystal. "Woops"

4)Hotsuma(ps2 shinobi) and Raikoh(Otogi) meet up in a bar. Awkward.
Note: Their games are basically the same except Shinobi is faster and more of a platformer then a hack & slash. In retrospect, I'm probably the only one who gets it.

5)We have a shot of Astal seen drinking from a carton of milk. He looks at the camera,
"You don't even know who I am"
I know family guy did this joke but seriously, Astal was a fun game back in the day.

6) ReZ is seen trapped in a blue screen of death.

7)Sir Tongara de Pepperouchau III(clockwork knight) is seen in bed with Chelsea, he turns to her then says,
"I'm sorry, I can't find my crank"

8) Mr. Bones is seen getting arrested for indecent exposure.
"I was not flashing a boner at those kids, I swear"

Well, that's all I got. Hope you like it.
I like a few of these. I can tell you put effort into them and they are definitely a cut above the rest of what we normally get. My favorite is the Ulala/Vectorman showerhead joke. I think you should expand on it more though. It doesn't have a punch as Tom said, and most of our ideas submitted for crossovers haven't been very good unlike this one. Keep it up man.
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Thank you, 792Ashman, for going through all those jokes just to say 3 lines. *Sigh* (badrevengeisbad)
Seriously though, they're not bad, but could be better.
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I just watched Metropolis Mayhem, and the ending caused this idea to appear. In SA2 and SA2B, you can injure Omochao, or even toss him off a cliff, but he recovers/reappears shortly after. Maybe this could be made into a short? Perhaps the characters could be wondering why he keeps coming back, etc?
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I think the texting and running joke is funny, but I know people who have died while texting and driving, and it's not a laughing matter to me. I know it's a spin off of it, but 1000s of people die from it every year.
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Shining Force short. Feel free to critique and expand on, I am by no means a pro writer. This is just something that popped into my head the other day.

<Scene: Prepping before battle on a field, can see enemies in the distance>
Max: Alright team, we'll have a team strike them from the east, and then-
Tao interrupts sounding only slightly angry, camera shows her silhouette from the back: Um... Max?
Max: Yes Tao-ohh my lord!
<He says this sounding flabbergasted as he turns to see an angry Tao in her secret bikini outfit>
Tao, angry: Whose bright idea was it to have me wear this on the battlefield?!
Max: Uh, er... um ah... *Looks around nervously*
<Tao, gritting teeth and groaning angrily, hits Max over the head with her staff. Camera pans out and looks toward bush as fighting sounds (Tao just beating Max) are heard. Rustling is seen and heard in a nearby bush as it pans in to reveal Nova watching and snickering. A womanly "A-HEM" is heard as Nova turns to see Anri in her secret outfit, arms crossed and an angry face. Camera then goes to a nervous looking Nova backing up and shadow approaching as it ends.>


Also, please tell me if I accidentally got this idea from another source, and apologies to whoever if I did.

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*Sonic & SEGA All-Stars Racing idea*

*The race starts in 3...2...1...GO*

Tails: This is gonna be awesome!

*Suddenly Alex the Kid approaches to Tails*

Tails: Huh?

Alex: *Smiles and starts challenges Tails into Rock,Paper,Scissors game*

Tails: What the heck!? I don't have time to play games with you!

Alex: *The game starts*

Tails: What the... I SAID NO!

SCENE 1:

Alex: *chooses rock*

Tails: *Runs out of time and chooses scissors* Alex! I said I don't want to play games with you! Leave me Alone!!!

Alex: *goes forward by racing Tails*

Tails: At last....

Alex: *Uses rock and rock rolls to Tails*

Tails: Oh my.... *car crashes*

SCENE 2

Alex: *chooses Paper*

Tails: *runs out of time* I ran out of time? Again?

Alex: *starts throwing paper at Tails*

Tails: Ow! Stop it!

Alex: *keeps throwing papers at Tails*

Tails: I said...*gets hit on head* Grrr....

SCENE 3

Alex: *chooses Scissors*

Tails: *runs out of time...again* When this will ever end?

Alex: *gets giant Scissors and smiles evilly to Tails*

Tails: Oh god...

Alex: *approaches closer to Tails and cuts his car-plane*

Tails: AAAH!!! Curse you Alex the Kid! Mark my words I will have my revenge!!!

ALTERNATIVE SCENE:

*1 year later...*

In Sonic & Sega all-stars racing transformed

*At a random stage with flying zone*

Tails: *approaches to Alex and evilly smiles* I WILL HAVE MY REVENGE NOW! *Challenges Alex the Kid to Rock,Paper,Scissors game*

Tails: *chooses unexpectedly Tails and sets his plane to autopilot mode*

Alex: *gets shocked by what Tails chooses and runs out time*

Tails: *Uses his Tails to fly at Alex* Need a hand? *grabs Alex's hands and throws him to sea and his plane falls down and crashes*

Alex: AAAAGH! *dies*

Tails: *gets back to his plane and sets the autopilot mode off*

Tails: At last... I HAVE MY REVENGE! *starts laughing like a crazy maniac*

*Tails approaches to portal which cars transform into car mode*

Tails: *still laughing and reaches portal and forgets to control his plane and crashes* Ouch...

Note: I don't know if the jokes good but seems to be fine just needs to be animated by using imagination and don't get joke? Tails is 13/14 years old and Alex the kid... well not to bother his age cause hello! His full name says he is kid so... yeah :Tails:

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^ I don't get the joke. I never actually played much Alex Kidd so maybe there's something I'm not getting. The thing is to try to get a joke that a wide variety of people will laugh at other than fans of that specific game. The best thing to do when trying to figure out new jokes is to play the games for a while and try to view things in a humorous logic. Then find one really good that'll make lots of different people laugh and share it.
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If you played the Alex Kidd or Alex the Kid i don't even know but just the name and game shows that he is playing rock paper scissors in game so i just used it again in a race also its like a revenge type or sort of you may not get the joke cause not played the game before on SEGA genesis, but still i used Tails cause well... he is still like kid but get the point Tails is now 14 and i was making his reaction to a KID playing RPS(short word) with Tails well its just Alex but his last name is Kid... you still don't get it? o-o?
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