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| sonicthehedgetwat | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 04:33 PM Post #61 |
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infintyalex, I think your idea for a sega shorts i great, maybe you could do tails running over sonic after he hits the ground |
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| Gregzilla | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 05:09 PM Post #62 |
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Alright, I thought it over, and I'll revise mine: -Opens with KapuKapu chasing ChuChus. He keeps using different gadgets and items to try and catch them, some being SEGA references. -After constantly failing, he decides to hide in the little rocket capsule launchpad. When the rocket launches, he is latched on to the side smiling evilly. -The rocket goes into space, and the KapuKapu's smile fades. He turns blue and runs out of breath, and falls off the rocket. He plummets towards a planet. -He lands humorously and looks for a solution to his problem. He sees an orange rocket in the distance, and rushes over to it excitedly. -He reaches the rocket and becomes happy. The rocket opens its eyes and reveals itself to be an Orange Wisp. They both have an awkward pause, then scream and run from each other. -The Wisp panicks and loses control, abruptly crashing into the KapuKapu. Better? EDIT: Wait, forgot to connect it back to the mice near the end. When he sees the rocket, he gets a little thought bubble of him riding it to chase the mice in their rocket. Edited by Gregzilla, Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 07:47 PM.
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| InfinityAlex | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 05:48 PM Post #63 |
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There seems to be a lot going on in that, Greg. Neat concept, though! |
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| Gregzilla | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 05:52 PM Post #64 |
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It's a bit complex, yeah, but I want to do something that has lots of little jokes, rather than just one setup to one punchline. That's usually my style. |
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| Rovenami | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 06:06 PM Post #65 |
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Daytona USA idea: Crew Chief: This is your crew chief, you're in a rolling start, good luck Hornet Driver: I know that...otherwise, I wouldn't be driving at full throttle, I wouldn't have the words "ROLLING START" in front of me and this guy wouldn't be singing this song Singer:....ROOOOLLLIINNNGG STTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRTTT!!!! |
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| 792Ashman | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 07:15 PM Post #66 |
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Dreamer
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Of course, the people with the animator handle earned that rank because they animated for SP. |
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| SilentlyVocal | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 07:44 PM Post #67 |
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Cosmic Queen
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Howdy there to Greg, I've seen your animations before and you've got some nice stuff under your belt. I look forward to seeing anything you have in mind for the Shorts. |
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STRANGE, ISN'T IT? SilentlyVocal is a voice monkey, working with the Sonic Paradox Team. For some reason she has a Twitter | |
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| KyoSo | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 07:48 PM Post #68 |
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Discount Waifu Material
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Oh, well then I take it back. Your idea was brilliantly thought out and I have absolutely no quarrels with it. The blatant flaws I pointed out were merely because of my intense jealously of your sense of wit so sharp it could open clamshell packaging without skipping a beat. ...better? |
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| SilentlyVocal | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 07:52 PM Post #69 |
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Cosmic Queen
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Marry me. |
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STRANGE, ISN'T IT? SilentlyVocal is a voice monkey, working with the Sonic Paradox Team. For some reason she has a Twitter | |
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| KyoSo | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 07:58 PM Post #70 |
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Discount Waifu Material
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Oh, I'm flattered but spoken for. |
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| silverfan95 | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 09:24 PM Post #71 |
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I have a NiGHTS animation idea. I planned on animating it but I was gonna post it here first. It's starts at a gameboy screen. Professor Oak appears on the screen. Then he proceeds to say, "Welcome to the wonderful world of Pokemon! So tell me, are you a boy or a girl?" The camera then switches to NiGHTS holding a gameboy. NiGHTS then says, "Damn it." I hope you guys like it. If you do, please tell me and I will start animating ASAP! |
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| SilentlyVocal | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 09:33 PM Post #72 |
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Cosmic Queen
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It's an...alright joke(?) But there's the problem of it being both a meme, and a crossover. |
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STRANGE, ISN'T IT? SilentlyVocal is a voice monkey, working with the Sonic Paradox Team. For some reason she has a Twitter | |
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| N0sSyndrome | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 09:35 PM Post #73 |
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Voice Actor
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The reference seems to be more towards Nintendo than Sega itself, the joke could work out, it's a matter of acting at this point, but yeah... I see more nintendo than Sega here. |
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| silverfan95 | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 09:40 PM Post #74 |
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Yeah, I knew it had a few problems. That's why I posted it here first. Oh well. Thanks for the feedback though! |
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| wakeangel2001 | Tuesday Aug 27 2013, 10:03 PM Post #75 |
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Hey! This is my first time posting here, but partly inspired by the Sonic shorts along with other animation collections I created my own series of joke comics I affectionately call my "Crackup series." I'm not an animator but maybe if deemed worthy some of them could be made into future shorts. I read the submission policy so I'm going to try and pick the ones that best fit. http://wakeangel2001.deviantart.com/art/The-Return-of-NiGHTS-74325295?q=gallery%3AWakeangel2001%2F26559558&qo=54 I know it's kind of a cheap crack at NiGHTS' voice actor but its one of my oldest comics. http://wakeangel2001.deviantart.com/art/Chronicle-Crackups-2-101427536?q=gallery%3AWakeangel2001%2F26559558&qo=48 I still think the top one is funny, based off the move set from Sonic Chronicles (a game RIFE for parody) http://wakeangel2001.deviantart.com/art/Battle-Crackup-2-110976397?q=gallery%3AWakeangel2001%2F26559558&qo=33 in addition to being a jab at the Sonic Shorts PSAs from the Adventures cartoon I like how this one actually flows directly from Amy Rose's behavior from Sonic Battle on the GBA (seriously, who the heck wrote her as an anorexic stalker and thought it would be charming?) http://wakeangel2001.deviantart.com/art/Secret-Rings-Crackup-118096616?q=gallery%3AWakeangel2001%2F26559558&qo=28 This level of Secret Rings made me go INSANE! Could they really adapt so little material from the 1001 arabian nights that they had to put in dinosaurs? http://wakeangel2001.deviantart.com/art/Rush-Crackup-4-135013359?q=gallery%3AWakeangel2001%2F26559558&qo=17 this is a pretty simple one, I was basically trying to find the least offensive way to make a shipping joke. http://wakeangel2001.deviantart.com/art/06-Crackup-167429354?q=gallery%3AWakeangel2001%2F26559558&qo=10 partly a pun, partly a jab at the nature of Mephiles, mostly an attempt to make a joke about Sonic '06 that didn't reference the glitches or the infamous kiss http://wakeangel2001.deviantart.com/art/Colors-Crackup-173100100?q=gallery%3AWakeangel2001%2F26559558&qo=9 from cute animals to tentacled aliens with the wrong number of eyes, the Amy panel at the bottom can be a short in itself but would have to follow the main part to have proper context http://wakeangel2001.deviantart.com/art/Rush-Crackup-5-263157655?q=gallery%3AWakeangel2001%2F26559558&qo=3 I like how this one is pretty much quoting the dialogue from the boss fight until the punch line (seriously Cream, wtf?) http://wakeangel2001.deviantart.com/art/Generations-Crackup-2-268216991?q=gallery%3AWakeangel2001%2F26559558&qo=2 this joke may be a little more adult, but I think it's still PG-13 enough to fit in with the theme. So that's what I got for now, I left out some of my cheap reference and movie parody comics (though I have a good Monty Python and the Holy Grail one for Sonic and the Black Knight) I hope you like them and maybe some constructive criticism if you think I can improve. |
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