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Alright, let me see:

GAME: Ristar the Shooting Star
LEVEL: 4-1 Miniboss
(Note: in the Japanese version of the game, it is slightly easier to beat the boss because you can tell which birds' heads are coming down. You can't tell when each head comes down in the American/European release of the game.)

(This is actually one of many differences: http://ristar-cluster.info/php-pages/jpn-vs-usa.htm)



Ristar: Man, that music is terrible...

*c note* *b note* *c note*

*Giant birds appear*

Ristar: What the heck?

*more bad music*

Ristar: Why are they dancing? this music is awful! Hey, why is there a musical note on it's hat-

*Bird's head comes down and Ristar is flattened*

Ristar: ...Owie.
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Tuesday May 27 2014, 04:35 AM
i have some ideas for shorts

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does any body has good Idea's and needs an animator?
My movie is getting better and better!!.................................Did you know that there is a game coming out too?
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Have you tried actually reading through the thread, or is that simply not a option?
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Wednesday Jul 9 2014, 03:27 PM
Have you tried actually reading through the thread, or is that simply not a option?
T-T , ok hear this:
Sonic was trying to save the world until he reaches rail canion stage, he tries to grid but a scurity pops out infront of him.
Security: hey! What do you think your doing?
Sonic: what AM I doing? Well, nothing, just trying to save your f**king world!
Security: you cant, you must be longer than 140 cm.
Sonic: I AM longer than that (stands infront of the cm board and sees that he's only 100 cm.
Security: see?
Sonic: I AM going to save this f**king world, and I AM going to kick your a** when Im done!
Then sonic uses trains to make him taller, when he gets back, he is covered with bandages because of that surgery. :no:
Security: your still not allowed.
Sonic: now WHAT?
Security: your longer than 160 cm, and bandages aren't allowed here.
Sonic: grrrr...F***************** (BOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!)
Security: ( gets out his clothes and apears that he's a staff at big red button) now thats a good sonic title!

Now the only problem is that most of the shorts will be sonic shorts...
Edited by supersonicgp456, Wednesday Jul 9 2014, 04:57 PM.
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Allow me to put way too much effort into explaining, beat by beat, why this doesn't work.

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Sonic was trying to save the world until he reaches rail canion stage, he tries to grid but a scurity pops out infront of him.
Security: hey! What do you think your doing?
Sonic: what AM I doing? Well, nothing, just trying to save your f**king world!

This isn't a rule, but personally I wouldn't bother throwing high-end profanity into the middle of every line of dialogue if it's just going to be bleeped. The noise distracts.

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Security: you cant, you must be longer than 140 cm.

Wouldn't it make more sense to, y'know, put this in a carnival stage if you're running with this bit?

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Sonic: I AM longer than that (stands infront of the cm board and sees that he's only 100 cm.
Security: see?
Sonic: I AM going to save this f**king world, and I AM going to kick your a** when Im done!

Sonic realizing he's too short should result in us immediately cutting to his attempts to become taller. The next two lines add nothing to the scene but time.

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Then sonic uses trains to make him taller,

This is the only potentially humorous moment in the whole idea, assuming we're even picturing the same thing. It's hard to tell, seeing as you made NO ATTEMPT TO SPECIFY HOW EXACTLY HE DID THIS.

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when he gets back, he is covered with bandages because of that surgery. :no:

I was unaware that "using trains to make him taller" qualified as surgery. I'm sure any doctor who attempted such an operation would get a rather nasty letter from Hippocrates.

Unfortunately it would be written in ancient Greek, and, being unable to read it, the doctor would presumably throw it out without a second thought and go back to selling homeopathic medicine and telling people not to give their children vaccines.

What a complete and utter bastard.

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Security: your still not allowed.
Sonic: now WHAT?
Security: your longer than 160 cm, and bandages aren't allowed here.

Instead of this nonsense reason (which I know is supposed to be funny, but it isn't), the robot could rightfully point out that SONIC IS INJURED AND IN NO POSITION TO SAVE THE WORLD and bar his entry on those grounds.

But none of this even matters because...

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Sonic: grrrr...F***************** (BOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!)
Security: ( gets out his clothes and apears that he's a staff at big red button) now thats a good sonic title!


...the whole thing was just a buildup to this ridiculously contrived, angeringly unfunny pun. I pray that this was added as an afterthought and that it wasn't the first thing you came up with here.

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Now the only problem is that most of the shorts will be sonic shorts...

Even if this got made, which it won't, there's no way you could possibly know that.

And I'll go ahead a preempt you by saying: Don't take this idea and just make the changes I suggested and repost it. This idea is entirely too flawed for that. Read the guide to writing short ideas, brainstorm and write something new. The best way to improve is to just keep moving forward, but only if you learn from your previous mistakes.

Take our advice to heart, don't just get pissed and write us off as assholes.
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In Sonic Adventure 1's Casinopolis level, in order to obtain the chaos emerald Sonic has to earn rings and place them in the vault, building a pile of money he can climb. The mechanism by which this is done is as follows:

-Sonic stands on switch
-Pincer arms pick him up and shake vigourously
-Rings pour out of Sonic
As you can see at ~4:10 here:



So, my idea -- though it may be a bit slapstick -- is to have the arms' grip falter. Sonic is sent flying into the ceiling and Tails, who is stood next to the switch, simply flies up to the emerald and grabs it, rendering Sonic's troubles pointless.


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Not the best, but i think it's workable.
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umg u guys i haz teh best idea
ok so sanic is running throu my-fanfick-sone and then meats teh trolololo guy and he flies awai throu teh pancakes with unickorns and then sanic says "biet mi sheyenee mehtall ahss!" and then he meats my fan chawickter cinos teh gohegdeh and den he farts in sanics faic and johgs awai and den all of sanics fwiends get into ah fight 4 no reazon and den dey all sai "f**k u all u R c**ts" bcuz deir stewpihd and den we see intehstinez 4 no reazon ahgain an den sanic runz in2 a twuck dat explodes 4 no reazon an den amee axes sexeh an den says a joke i dunt understahnd an den sanic.xex killz dem all
U MUST MAEK DIS A SHORT I CUMMAND U ALL 2 MAEK DIS
Edited by Sonicyay2, Saturday Jul 12 2014, 08:04 AM.
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So, my idea -- though it may be a bit slapstick -- is to have the arms' grip falter. Sonic is sent flying into the ceiling and Tails, who is stood next to the switch, simply flies up to the emerald and grabs it, rendering Sonic's troubles pointless.

What if, since rings are lost usually due to damage, the arms are actually hurting him to remove the rings.

So he dies.

Horribly.

And now this:

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umg u guys i haz teh best idea

nOO IT teh worstest11

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ok so sanic is running throu my-fanfick-sone

ur mom is a fanfick

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and then meats teh trolololo guy and he flies awai throu teh pancakes with unickorns and then sanic says "biet mi sheyenee mehtall ahss!"

yOWUE STOLE THAT FFrom THE SHOW MY DAD WONT LET EM WATCHN ???

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and then he meats my fan chawickter cinos teh gohegdeh

cool i am steal ur charcter suck ym duck

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and den he farts in sanics faic and johgs awai and den all of sanics fwiends get into ah fight 4 no reazon

NO RASSON IS THE BESTT RESDON

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and den dey all sai "f**k u all u R c**ts" bcuz deir stewpihd

lololololTEH FUNNY WORDS I NOT ALLOWED!!!!!!!!!!1111#

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and den we see intehstinez 4 no reazon ahgain an den sanic runz in2 a twuck dat explodes 4 no reazon an den amee axes sexeh an den says a joke i dunt understahnd an den sanic.xex killz dem all

u asssucker its sanic.xee not xex dye forever bich

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U MUST MAEK DIS A SHORT I CUMMAND U ALL 2 MAEK DIS

bICH I STAB U
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Saturday Jul 12 2014, 09:26 AM
nOO IT teh worstest11
ur mom is a fanfick
yOWUE STOLE THAT FFrom THE SHOW MY DAD WONT LET EM WATCHN ???
cool i am steal ur charcter suck ym duck
NO RASSON IS THE BESTT RESDON
lololololTEH FUNNY WORDS I NOT ALLOWED!!!!!!!!!!1111#
u asssucker its sanic.xee not xex dye forever bich
bICH I STAB U

OK good my joke got attention.
That means it worked! Yay!
Smegerama
Saturday Jul 12 2014, 09:26 AM
What if, since rings are lost usually due to damage, the arms are actually hurting him to remove the rings.

So he dies.

Horribly.

How about...a badnik comes in to deposit HIS rings and sees a chance to kill So-no, that's not as funny.
EDIT: There ya go, Smeg. Happy?
Edited by Sonicyay2, Saturday Jul 12 2014, 05:14 PM.
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Saturday Jul 12 2014, 10:19 AM
How about...a badnik comes in to deposit HIS rings and sees a chance to kill So-no, that's not as funny.
Instead of rings, the badnik is here to deposit four hundred flickies. The process is considerably more chaotic.

(Also, Sonicyay2, I recommend only quoting the relevant portion of a post so we don't have walls of text like that one.)
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Saturday Jul 12 2014, 04:55 PM
Instead of rings, the badnik is here to deposit four hundred flickies. The process is considerably more chaotic.
Wait a second, how would all those flickies fit in that badnik? Is it a clown badnik?
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SMERGERAMA U CAN GO EAT SONICS NUTS AND DIE ON THE SIDE OF A ROAD U PEICE OF SHIT NO ONE WILL CARE AND UR A TOTAL DICK IM GOING TO FIND U AND CHOP OFF EVERY LIM OF YOUR AND CHOP OFF UR DICK AND SHOVE IT DOWN THAT BIG MOUTH OF YOURS BUT JUST RNOUGH TO WICH U CAN SLOWLY BLEED TO DEATH AND I MAY BE CLOSER THAN U EXPECT BUT TILL DEATH U WILL UNDERSTAND
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Friday Jul 25 2014, 08:38 AM
SMERGERAMA U CAN GO EAT SONICS NUTS AND DIE ON THE SIDE OF A ROAD U PEICE OF SHIT NO ONE WILL CARE AND UR A TOTAL DICK IM GOING TO FIND U AND CHOP OFF EVERY LIM OF YOUR AND CHOP OFF UR DICK AND SHOVE IT DOWN THAT BIG MOUTH OF YOURS BUT JUST RNOUGH TO WICH U CAN SLOWLY BLEED TO DEATH AND I MAY BE CLOSER THAN U EXPECT BUT TILL DEATH U WILL UNDERSTAND
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