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Sunday May 18 2014, 11:31 PM
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RapidKirby's idea would still be arguably eligible if the game is Mega Drive exclusive (not sure), to be fair.
In a way it is however at the same time it's not. Sparkster adventure 1 and 2 was made by Konami, There is a Sparkster for the SNES, the Adventure was actually made for the mega drive, and reboot under a whole new development team was designed for Xbox arcade. In the end Sparkster has no real connection to Sega other then Adventure on mega drive and is more of a 3rd party game like most Konami games. I also like to add he was in many Konami games including a Contra game for the PS2. and was even in one for the DS
Edited by Jinsoku, Tuesday May 20 2014, 11:29 PM.
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My idea is based off the end of the Megaman/Sonic crossover

SUPER SONIC IS ABOUT TO USE CHAOS CONTROL BEFORE EGGMAN ATTACKS HIM
Sonic: It's this or nothing!
SONIC USES CHAOS CONTROL BUT THEN WINCES
Sonic: Wait...that doesn't look right
SONIC 06
Sonic: Eggman what did you do!?
Eggman: Ha! Sucks to be you!
EGGMAN SEE'S HIS 06 DESIGN
Eggman: Oh balls...
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I can't for the life of me decipher that mess.
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I thought I was understanding it at first... but then I re-read it, yeah, I'm as clueless as the next person. Maaaayhaps he was jumping the shark when he gave himself the title of "AWESOME writer".
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After sleeping on it I think he means something along this?
Sonic and Eggman are fighting as sonic uses chaos control, however a blow to sonic causes him to warp time and space incorrectly turning the world from the archie style into sonic 06 as all planned by Eggman. Sonic is confused as Eggman shows victory till he sees himself.

least I think?
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Jinsoku
Monday May 26 2014, 02:16 PM
After sleeping on it I think he means something along this?
Sonic and Eggman are fighting as sonic uses chaos control, however a blow to sonic causes him to warp time and space incorrectly turning the world from the archie style into sonic 06 as all planned by Eggman. Sonic is confused as Eggman shows victory till he sees himself.

least I think?
Close enough.

Even with the edit Jin made, Sonic 06 jokes have been done to death and have lost their charm.
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Besides, an '06 joke comes off as lazy.
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'06 digs are the airline food joke of the Sonic fandom.
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Yeah...sorry about that...
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Okay, BETTER idea!
Sega Sonic, Archie Sonic and Fleetway Sonic are at a fast food joint

Sonic Boom Sonic walks in

Boom: HI GUUYYYS!!! XD
Fleetway: OH GOD! Who let the fan character in!?
Boom: HEY!
Sega: Nope, he's definitely a Sonic, this one of your multiverse guys?
Archie: I don't know, there's like half a billion of those guys
Boom: I'm a REDESIGN! You know? For the new cartoon?
Sega: What's with the scarf? I'm already getting my ass sued by DBZ for the super form, the LAST thing I need is people saying I ripped off uncharted
Boom: It's ACTUALLY a banda-
Sega: Hey speaking of Super forms, has anyone else noticed how my games haven't had Super form final boss in ages?
Archie: Probably because yours is overused and mines way better...
ARCHIE GOES SUPER
Archie: I AMMMM GODDDD!!!
Sega: Hey MY super form's at LEAST better than HIS, he goes all psycotic and has the teeth and claws...
Fleetway: Whatever you say, mr "werehog"
Sega: HEY! In all fairness, HE'S gonna go werehog in HIS comic! And unlike me, he WON'T have control of it!
ARCHIE POPS BACK TO NORMAL
Archie: Say what now???
Sega: What about you? What's YOUR Super form like?
Boom: Wellll...chaos emeralds haven't exactly been "confirmed" for my continuity yet soooo....
Sega, Achie and Fleetway: GET OUT!!!

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i have some ideas for shorts
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Tuesday May 27 2014, 04:35 AM
i have some ideas for shorts
Obviously you don't since this was the only thing you posted.
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@Speedhog:
Hello! First off be wary of the "Edit" button below your post, it can prevent any double posting and keep you from trouble.

Now about your idea. I feel it's extremely hard to follow and feels like a jumbled mess. Slow down and build up a punch line because from what I'm making out its just people shouting back and forth at each other to prove ones point or just random bursts of things that feel they don't belong. Furthermore I feel you're using too many references and characters that may not connect to people. Not everyone reads Archie and may not even know who Fleetway is while connecting Sega Corp with Sonic Boom. Now I do feel a premise of the redesigns still have tons of potential but I think you just missed the mark. I recommend before posting a idea is to simply work on it, even sleep on it till the next day as you might not find it as funny from when you first thought, try telling it to friends or family who might know the subject and see if they think it's funny. Even something as simple can be great if effort is shown into it.
Edited by Jinsoku, Tuesday May 27 2014, 06:17 AM.
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Jinsoku
Tuesday May 27 2014, 06:15 AM
@Speedhog:
Hello! First off be wary of the "Edit" button below your post, it can prevent any double posting and keep you from trouble.

Now about your idea. I feel it's extremely hard to follow and feels like a jumbled mess. Slow down and build up a punch line because from what I'm making out its just people shouting back and forth at each other to prove ones point or just random bursts of things that feel they don't belong. Furthermore I feel you're using too many references and characters that may not connect to people. Not everyone reads Archie and may not even know who Fleetway is while connecting Sega Corp with Sonic Boom. Now I do feel a premise of the redesigns still have tons of potential but I think you just missed the mark. I recommend before posting a idea is to simply work on it, even sleep on it till the next day as you might not find it as funny from when you first thought, try telling it to friends or family who might know the subject and see if they think it's funny. Even something as simple can be great if effort is shown into it.
Okay, thanks! I'm just a little eager to get my idea out there :''''D
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