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| darkerturbo | Thursday Mar 13 2014, 03:36 PM Post #316 |
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official unofficial executive flip flopper
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Not bad in my opinion, though we'll have to see what the people with talent think |
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| OldFashionedLizard | Friday Mar 14 2014, 08:19 PM Post #317 |
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WELCOME TO ST ALPHONZOS PANCAKE BREAKFAST
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Thanks Turbo! |
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| Sonicyay2 | Wednesday Mar 19 2014, 03:10 PM Post #318 |
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I'm Sonicyay2
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When did that appear in the game? |
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Don't you dare call me Sonicgay, OR ELSE... I make half-decent Stickman animations. You might like them. Oh, I also like Sonic, Mario, Powerpuff Girls, Sonic, Sonic, SpongeBob, and Sonic. Did I mention Sonic? | |
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| TheeHedgehog | Wednesday Mar 19 2014, 10:53 PM Post #319 |
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So I had this idea and I actually animated it but I'm not happy with how it ends and I think it has a lot more potential. So this is basically what it is- Sonic is running and doing all sorts of parkour, running, jumping ect. Sonic finds a red star ring a looks really happy. Sonic then looks up to the corner of the screen and sees he's missing the the fourth red star ring. And that's when I didn't know what should happen next so I then made him get really angry. Then I had the camera zoom out to show the earth and 3 seconds later an explosion happens. So if you have an idea on how it should end then please tell me! It'd be really appreciated. Link to animation: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wtrwkEBXEiY&list=UUmLFAKsv-0cfgMgOjyWwClA |
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| Piggybank | Thursday Mar 20 2014, 08:09 AM Post #320 |
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I'm personally not liking the ending too much, but what you have leading up to it is looking pretty good. The animation and linework could use some more polish, but I love how you're using colors and how you drew the background. ![]() Maybe what might lead to a better ending is to have Sonic frantically search for the last red ring, instead of explode? I know I've had plenty of trouble trying to get one of the red rings in Sonic Generations simply because you have to hit one of the ramps juuuuust right in order to touch the red ring. And of course, I always overshoot or undershoot and completely fly by the ring. Haven't quite figured it out yet. XD In fact, I'm sure there's quite a few short ideas in just having to acquire one of the red rings. Maybe that might be worth exploring more when deciding how to end your short? |
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| TheeHedgehog | Thursday Mar 20 2014, 10:53 AM Post #321 |
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Actually that gives me an idea on how it should end! Maybe it could end with sonic running all over the place yelling, "Where is it?!? Where is it?!?!" and then he finds it and then it could cut to him looking at a ramp that leads to the red ring. Sonic could be wearing a hard hat and looking down at instructions. On the instructions it could have like a stick figure sonic building speed on a slope, going on the ramp and grabbing the red ring. And then sonic would go and do this and he would keep over shooting and undershooting the ring. And maybe one of his attempts could be running and when he gets to a ramp he sees a ring on the floor and says, "Hey look a ring!" and then falls off the ramp. |
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| TheeHedgehog | Saturday Mar 22 2014, 12:15 AM Post #322 |
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Thought of another idea while play SA. So you know how in SA, E102 (or Gamma) releases Amy? Well when he does Amy says, "are you sure" and then she leaves. Well here's my idea- Gamma: You should get going. Amy: Are you sure? Gamma: *grabs flicky and pushes amy back into cell* Haha nope! *Gamma walks away and Amy is in shambles* Or it could end like this- Amy: Are you sure? Gamma: Oh no, I'm absolutely not sure. In fact, I was reconsidering my actions. Dumbass.. Actually.. you know what? *Takes flicky* Get back in there runt. *Pushes Amy back into cell and walks away. Amy is in shambles* |
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| Piggybank | Saturday Mar 22 2014, 02:08 PM Post #323 |
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I'll have to play through E-102 Gamma's story again sometime, but I can't help but feel like both of those endings put E-102 out-of-character. E-102 doesn't seem like the kind of character to just turn into a jerk like that. However, it does initially seem like a character that both questions it's actions like a human, but also blindly does stuff without questioning much of anything, like an actual computer or robot. Maybe that could be played with in a short? |
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| CodeWeaver | Saturday Mar 22 2014, 02:28 PM Post #324 |
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Piggybank, I was talking with Thee on a chat when he came up with the idea; the underlying funny to the joke is that Gamma, at that point, detaches from his robot unfeelingness and, out of some goodness, lets Amy free; becomes a little more human. The joke is that he shows some human trait by being sarcastic instead, reconsidering and forcing Amy back in.
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| TheeHedgehog | Saturday Mar 22 2014, 03:14 PM Post #325 |
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Well maybe instead of saying, "haha nope" he could just say, "no" and grab the flicky and so on? Gamma:
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| Rockman | Monday Apr 7 2014, 09:59 PM Post #326 |
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I'm not dead ;u;
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Hey, it's me again, if anyone cares I have beaten Ristar once so i think i could find ideas there. Here's one: You know how at the end of every level there is a little handle that you swing around and go into the next level? (SETTING: LEVEL 1, PLANET FLORA) *Ristar kills the first boss* Ristar: Aw yeah, that was easy Man possessed by first boss: You saved me! Ristar: Yeah, I know. I was there. Now i need to go somewhere else *Ristar grabs the handle and swings around it in circles* Ristar: wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, should i stay on this thing, because it's fun to swing on (text appears at the top of the screen. It says: NO) *Ristar is sent flying into space* Ristar: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Game: FLORA CLEAR! Ristar: Who cares, just help me! Game: SCORE 10011110101010111 Ristar: I CANT CONTROL MYSELF! THERE'S NO GRAVITY HERE Game: WONDERFUL! (it says something like that after your score is shown) *Ristar falls into Planet Undertow* Game: ROUND 2, PLANET UNDERTOW Ristar: Aaaaaaaaaa-oof! (hits ground) |
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I once did Carnival Night Act 2 in 6:43 and felt like a god because of it. And then I found a shortcut and did it in 4:05. Now I AM a god. | |
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| Rockman | Monday Apr 7 2014, 10:08 PM Post #327 |
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I'm not dead ;u;
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What sucks is that i do NOT have Flash, or any good animation thingy. But I could probably find a good person to animate it, such as TheWax70, Piggybank, Boozerman, etc. (Also sorry if 3 posts in a row is too long) Edited by Rockman, Saturday Jun 14 2014, 06:57 PM.
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I once did Carnival Night Act 2 in 6:43 and felt like a god because of it. And then I found a shortcut and did it in 4:05. Now I AM a god. | |
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| Rockman | Saturday Apr 12 2014, 12:05 AM Post #328 |
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I'm not dead ;u;
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Just thought of another. This could be one of those separated into two or three parts: Game: Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle (SEGA, 1989) Part 1: Alex Kidd wants a bike so he goes in a building. He doesn't expect what appears: a blue gorilla keeping the bike to himself. Gorilla: HAHA! YOU CAN'T GET THIS BIKE.... Alex Kidd: Oh really now? Gorilla: ....UNLESS YOU BEAT ME IN ROCK PAPER SCISSORS. Alex Kidd: what the heck? that's stupid! Gorilla: I DON'T CARE! *Rock paper scissors theme* Alex Kidd: BROKEN TOE! *Alex chooses rock, gorilla has scissors* Alex Kidd: HAHA I GET YOUR BIKE *Gorilla is crushed by a 10,000T weight* Alex Kidd: O_O *leaves* Part 2: Short montage starts: *Riding bike* Alex: WHEE Level 2 Alex: WHEE Level 3 Alex: WHEE Level 4 Alex: WHEE Level 5 Alex: WHEE Level 6 Alex: WHEE Level 7 Alex: WHEE Level 8 Alex: WHEE :Short montage ends Level 9 (THE LEVEL) Game: ROCK MOUNTAIN 2. THIS LEVEL IS VERTICAL, SUCKER! Alex: What?!? Aw frick!!! *Climbing* Alex: Wow, this a bigger mountain than i thought (NOTE: It's a small level but a HARD one. Like the one after it.) Rock with face: Lol i have a face! Die! Alex: Not now. Old man hologram: Die Alex: No, mr hologram! (1 hour later) Alex: Whew! *collapses onto floor* *is right in front of the end of the level* Alex: Wait..why am i sitting here. Part 3: Game: Level 11, the Sky Castle Alex: Oh no... *Short montage of Alex running into things* Later.. Alex: Finally Ashra: BOO! Alex: Oh boy. Let me guess, you want me to play rock paper scissors with you Ashra: YES! *Alex wins* Ashra: NUUU! THAT WASNT FAIR! THIS IS AN OUTRAGE! THAT DIDN'T COUNT! ONE MORE TIME! *Alex wins* Ashra: ARGH. I WILL THROW MY ARMS AT YOU! *All of his arms are thrown back at his face* Ashra: You're mean! I want my mommy! King Thor: Hi Alex! I was not kidnapped and you did not have to save me which means you went through all of that crap and it turns out you did it for nothing! Don't you LOVE pointless quests and run-on sentences? Alex: WAIT WHAT *Zooms out to show a view of Planet Paperock, which is a crumpled up ball of paper. There is an explosion, or a tear in the paper* If this idea is too complicated or too long, you may scrap it. But I thought about this for a while. |
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I once did Carnival Night Act 2 in 6:43 and felt like a god because of it. And then I found a shortcut and did it in 4:05. Now I AM a god. | |
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| Jinsoku | Saturday Apr 12 2014, 01:15 AM Post #329 |
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I recommend copying all your work, edit your first post, then past it all in one neat post, delete the the two un-needed posts to finish. Even if it is as long as it may be. Just saying...
Edited by Jinsoku, Saturday Apr 12 2014, 01:19 AM.
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| Sweet_lil_Eliza | Saturday Apr 12 2014, 03:35 AM Post #330 |
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Excessively chatty, hypnotising, chocolate lover
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He can simply put all three separate by spoilers in the same post... |
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