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Topic Started: Saturday Aug 24 2013, 04:04 PM (53,056 Views)
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john jobs
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:40 PM
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- Jinsoku
- Wednesday Nov 13 2013, 05:02 PM
Hello as requested by Piggy here are the updated ideas i recently posted with tweaks, idea 1 is absent due to that Piggy already wishes to use it. (Thank you again ^^)
Idea 2: This one involves Amigo And Ulala, now both characters are from rythem games so I was thinking they are both throwing a concert in the theme of there music style and game, Amigo with his maracas, and Ulala with her guitar/microphone/dancing. They both want to advertise their concert on a local SEGA gatherings with flyers and advertisements however they both planned the concert on the same day and this throws them both into a competitive personality as they battle it out on who will give away the most flyers as try to do everything they can to sabotage the another (Like stealing flyers/people, tricking them away in some sorts, dropping a piano on them, etc). A sort of Spy vs Spy Style of play could work with this.
Alternate idea 2: They both get up on stage and start doing dance moves and music according to there game and here they both use a identical concept to try to get the other off stage. (I could see Ulala bringing in Space Micheal in this scenario to help out as well as Amigo bringing in Amiga)
Idea 3 (only Ending B has been tweaked): This involves Sonic, Tails, Manic, and Sonia. Tails comes to Sonic talking about brother hood and how they are great buds and in the conversation Sonic brings up how he use to have a brother and a sister and be in a band with them. Tails is shocked and asked what happen to them. Sonic simply says "Well they wanted to do a solo career or something." Tails replys by "Well where are they now?" and then Sonic says "Ya know I'm not quite sure." as he thinks about it.
Ending A: It cuts away to both of them on the street asking change with a sign next to them going "Will play for food" Ending B: It cuts away and actually shows the two on top of a pile of money with golden/platinum versions of there instruments and decked out in white clothing and Manic speaks out. "Hey Sonia do you you remember that little brother of ours who said he was gonna make it big as a hero or something?" and Sonia reply's. "We had a brother?"
Idea 4: This can involve Either Sonic, Tails, or Beat. Now in SEGA all star tennis there is a area where you have to fight zombies with tennis balls, however when the character attempts this and hits a tennis ball to a zombie, how about it doesn't actually work and just annoys the zombies and they approach the character as normal.
Sonic Ending (Original): They get closer to the character he yells out "Who thought it was a great idea to fight zombies with tennis balls!"
Tails Ending (The requested ending by Piggy as I thought it suited Tails): Tails throws away the racket and screams out "Who needs tennis balls when I can just type them away with my brilliant spelling skills!" This is where he pulls out a laptop and starts playing a game like typing of the dead with them.
Beat Ending: As they approach Beat tosses his racket away and pulls out his spray paint cans and starts spraying the zombies in the eyes with them like its pepper spray and the zombies fall crying as he starts running into the zombie crowed spraying them in style with his skating skills (tripping them and jumping over them). When finished he spins them in his pockets like western guns and turns to walk off, however one of the Zombie brutes spawns and starts to approach Beat and Beat says. "I'm going to need more paint cans..."
Idea 5: Involves Ristar and Alex Kidd. this is a kinda the same idea to another Sonic short but with a small twist. Ristar finds something that flings him unexpectedly into the air (Spring, Catapult, Knuckles throwing him, etc) And as he flys off screaming for his life, Alex spots him off in the distance and says with a smile. "A Shooting star!" He then claps his hands together with his eyes closed and says " I wish I was SEGAs mascot again!"
Alright so I did some re-work on them and I hope you like the changes even if some are subtle but again please leave your opines and ideas on how i can improve these ones or start new ones~ Thank you~ do ya have a animator
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Jinsoku
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:42 PM
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- Thursday Nov 14 2013, 08:02 PM
Tyranis I'm sorry but I just didn't get it... and copying another franchise involved thats not SEGA kinda defeats the point of a SEGA short.
hay do you have a animator I myself don't have a animator, I don't tend to keep them locked up in my basement to use whenever I please. Piggybank said he liked one of my ideas to use if that's what you mean, but he is free to change his mind however he pleases as I don't control him O.o. If a animator likes a idea they will ask you if they can use it, don't badger them and consistently ask for one otherwise your just going to get on their bad side.
Edited by Jinsoku, Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:43 PM.
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tyranis760
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:44 PM
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- tyranis760
- Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:23 PM
I have a sonic.exe idea but I don't know if you would like it
You can never know unless you post it and see if someone likes it, but don't just post it right away think about it for a few and see how you can work it out and drive a plot to where the joke is going, add a Who,What,When,Where,Why,How. Read Smegeramas guide a few times over. Even possibly ask a few friends if they think it can be funny or if they can add something to it. Put time into your jokes and they can be funny is the basis of what I'm saying. dude I already posted it like 2 days ago
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tyranis760
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:45 PM
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I don't have an animator yet I've been trying to get an animator
Edited by tyranis760, Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:46 PM.
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john jobs
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:46 PM
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ok but i do like idea 3 with ending A plus im free to do the animation for u if you want
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Jinsoku
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:47 PM
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- tyranis760
- Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:23 PM
I have a sonic.exe idea but I don't know if you would like it
You can never know unless you post it and see if someone likes it, but don't just post it right away think about it for a few and see how you can work it out and drive a plot to where the joke is going, add a Who,What,When,Where,Why,How. Read Smegeramas guide a few times over. Even possibly ask a few friends if they think it can be funny or if they can add something to it. Put time into your jokes and they can be funny is the basis of what I'm saying.
dude I already posted it like 2 days ago Then they either didn't like it or one simply hasn't had the time to read it. They have lives to live outside of this and its going to take time for them to read these posts. Calm down and give them a bit of time to read them and feedback you.
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tyranis760
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:47 PM
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- Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:46 PM
ok but i do like idea 3 with ending A plus im free to do the animation for u if you want what's idea 3
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tyranis760
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:49 PM
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- Jinsoku
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- tyranis760
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- Jinsoku
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- tyranis760
- Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:23 PM
I have a sonic.exe idea but I don't know if you would like it
You can never know unless you post it and see if someone likes it, but don't just post it right away think about it for a few and see how you can work it out and drive a plot to where the joke is going, add a Who,What,When,Where,Why,How. Read Smegeramas guide a few times over. Even possibly ask a few friends if they think it can be funny or if they can add something to it. Put time into your jokes and they can be funny is the basis of what I'm saying.
dude I already posted it like 2 days ago
Then they either didn't like it or one simply hasn't had the time to read it. They have lives to live outside of this and its going to take time for them to read these posts. Calm down and give them a bit of time to read them and feedback you. I have to get my ideas out there I'm just waiting and I also have a life
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:54 PM
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I have 2 parody ideas but it's been done alot but not exactly like my idea
Edited by tyranis760, Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:55 PM.
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Jinsoku
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:54 PM
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Tyranis I understand that and that's fine but iv'e seen you go around and ask for one even in the introduction thread. I'm only trying to help and this isn't even the place to really talk about this sort of subject. So I'm going to go now and let this ideas thread remain a ideas thread.
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john jobs
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Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:54 PM
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- Thursday Nov 14 2013, 10:46 PM
ok but i do like idea 3 with ending A plus im free to do the animation for u if you want
what's idea 3 read the post up above
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Friday Nov 15 2013, 08:49 AM
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Alright tyranis760, this has gone on long enough. You have been breaking the rules on this forum for more than a week now. You are double posting. You have to WAIT UNTIL AFTER SOMEONE HAS REPLIED TO YOUR FIRST POST TO POST AGAIN. Whenever you post multiple times it is breaking the rules of the forum and aggravating the progress we make here. If you do it again, I won't hesitate to contact someone with higher authority around here.
And in response to your last post, only very good ideas get animated by our animators. There have been plenty of great ideas posted for shorts that simply had no animator to back them, so learn patience and grow. Also respect is important when you're posting in this specific thread.
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Friday Nov 15 2013, 02:56 PM
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Alright tyranis760, this has gone on long enough. You have been breaking the rules on this forum for more than a week now. You are double posting. You have to WAIT UNTIL AFTER SOMEONE HAS REPLIED TO YOUR FIRST POST TO POST AGAIN. Whenever you post multiple times it is breaking the rules of the forum and aggravating the progress we make here. If you do it again, I won't hesitate to contact someone with higher authority around here.
And in response to your last post, only very good ideas get animated by our animators. There have been plenty of great ideas posted for shorts that simply had no animator to back them, so learn patience and grow. Also respect is important when you're posting in this specific thread. I didn't think I was being disrespectful if I was I'm sorry
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john jobs
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Friday Nov 15 2013, 10:17 PM
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Alright tyranis760, this has gone on long enough. You have been breaking the rules on this forum for more than a week now. You are double posting. You have to WAIT UNTIL AFTER SOMEONE HAS REPLIED TO YOUR FIRST POST TO POST AGAIN. Whenever you post multiple times it is breaking the rules of the forum and aggravating the progress we make here. If you do it again, I won't hesitate to contact someone with higher authority around here.
And in response to your last post, only very good ideas get animated by our animators. There have been plenty of great ideas posted for shorts that simply had no animator to back them, so learn patience and grow. Also respect is important when you're posting in this specific thread. sup by the way that was not disrespectful he was just asking
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Saturday Nov 16 2013, 09:58 AM
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- Saturday Nov 9 2013, 01:19 AM
this short idea is 90th anniversary : it starts with the first sonic game intro then moves to the 15th anniversary then goes to the 20th and then the 90th and as the music keeps playing and sonic comes up as an old sonic and when the music stops he falls out of the ring and in the water dead. please tell me if you like Now I am not going to say your ideas are bad, but the way you express them is bad. I am also posting your "bail", and have some advice for you. Please learn some grammar, patience, and if you need somebody's direct focus, just do what I do and send a private message so you do not end up causing a flame war. Next, most animators on here come up with their short ideas on their own and do not ask for inspiration. It is rare someone picks up an idea, and I have never seen that happen other than people saying others ideas are really good. Plus, some animators have enough free time only to create one short.
Now as for your ideas, I think they are really good and creative. If everyone had a mind like yours, this could have been a television special. However, we should learn to just be patient. I hope I didn't appear too rough on you. You have much potential. I have heard you found an animator as well, so good job and good luck.
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