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Topic Started: Saturday Aug 24 2013, 04:04 PM (53,061 Views)
llirbwerdnadivad
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Eh...honestly, I don't get what's so funny about the more recent ones...maybe I'm just dense, but I'm not seeing it...
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New idea:
Everyone knows Sonic's speed comes from his shoes, and Tails starts yelling at Sonic about how he was nearly as fast as Sonic in the second game, and he only wears shoes to protect his feet. He also pulls in Knuckles as he is walking by and Knuckles claims that he does not need shoes to run so fast, but Sonic butts right back in after jokingly make Knuckles take his gloves off and tells him to throw a punch, and Knuckles punches him to the ground, (with Sonic's right side being shown up) and takes off Sonic's shoes, ending in a "OH shu-" (unfinished "oh shoot") from a Jaleel White Sonic voice.


One last idea from me:
The Virtua Cops squad has to go on a Tokyo assignment due to "illegal street racing". The camera follows in the car on a first person point of view, with nothing changing yet. (this is taking place during All Stars Racing, not transformed.) As a racer comes by, another person is shown using the homing missile (which you must detonate remotely). The cops write them down for terrorist attacks, and after they use a radar to detect how many racers are left. Upon the last one crossing, the cops set a spike trap. This causes a pile up when the racers come, and it grows severe enough that Knuckles (he rides a quad here), swerves to the left to avoid a crash (just where the cops have parked the car), but flips over. As tails comes by, he makes the same mistake, but attempts to take off. He starts out successful, but as the back wheels bump Knuckles (whom is on the ground), Tails plane crashes the front end into the spike set, (his plane got flipped) and the cops say over the radio "can we get an escort to the airport...", now realizing that it was a race. End of short

I did make a few other ideas, only a page back, and if anyone wants to give me their critic, that would be appreciated greatly!
Edited by Jakinator178, Sunday Oct 6 2013, 07:20 PM.
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All right after reading the rules I've come up with something at least adequate. I was trying hard to come up with something not sonic related to give some variety.

Idea 1: (Beat skates in Shibuya-cho and does some graffiti on a near by truck and skates away)

>Ryo Hazuki Enter from the left>


Ryo: Hmm, I need more leads if I'm to find out who murdered my father.


(Ryo stands in front of the graffiti-ed wall to think)


JSR Policeman: Hey you there FREEZE!(Pointing at Ryo)


Ryo: Oh! the local authorities surely they should know something.

Ryo: SIR! DO YOU KNOW WHERE I CAN FIND SOME SAILO-

(A hug group of policemen run at Ryo chanting huthuthuthuthuthut jump at Ryo and dogpile on him)


(Ryo brakes out sending several policemen flying)


(Some the other policemen try and apprehend Ryo and Ryo fends them off while trying to reason with them within the chaos)


(A man puts his hand on Ryo's shoulder)

Man: Hey!

(Out of muscle memory Ryo knocks the man down revealing to be Captain Onishima)


Captain Onishima: Bah! You brat, that was a lucky hit!

Ryo: Lucky Hit?! (Ryo exclaims excitedly)

(Ryo gets knocked out by one of the policemen's nightstick)


~End~


Let know if its in approved or in suitable taste.


EDIT~

Idea 1.5: [its 1.5 because these are much shorter jokes concepts also I'm not sure if they're funny enough]

(Sonic runs the last part of Wave Ocean's Mach Speed sections and just as sonic finishes runing through the corkscrew and jumps towards the beach, Sonic faceplants into the sand comically)

~end~

Soleanna boys- Sonic smacks them down to the ground and into walls at super sonic speed.

(In Sonic 06 Sonic tries to find the Soleanna boys in the town of Soleanna, when Sonic tags them running as super sonic speeds, the kids get thrown into walls,water, and bells)


~end~












Edited by werephoenix, Sunday Oct 6 2013, 09:29 PM.
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Eh... doesn't seem to be a whole lot of Sega shorts being worked on at the moment, right? I need to squeeze my way into more than 2 shorts this time!
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I might have an idea for someone to animate. I'm thinking it should be called Night at the DMV. It's about him/her trying to get his/her license...and fails miserably.
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Here's an idea I got this morning. I'll try to be descriptive yet concise, so if an animator by chance likes it, it will be easier to visualize:

(Mushroom Hill Zone act 2 music plays, "camera" pans into the forest, and of course we see dancing mushrooms, and we see the act 1 miniboss happily chopping wood)

http://i1.ytimg.com/vi/sVfGC9YLpTs/hqdefault.jpg

Miniboss: "I'm a lumberjack and I'm OK! I sleep all night and I work all day! I'm a lumberjack and..."

Suddenly Sonic and Tails both pounce on him. Hitting him through jumps.

Miniboss: AAAAAAh! Hey what did I do to you?!?! AAAAAHHHH SOMEBODY HELP ME!!!!

(After a few hits he breaks apart onto the forest floor and dies)
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Crossovers generally don't work well unless you REALLY know what you're doing, and the point of the lumberjack song from Monty Python is to imply homosexuality and crossdressing more than being a lumberjack. It could work, but I'd probably rework it a bit to exclude the reference.

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http://sonicparadox.net/topic/6729620/1/
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short idea
Ok this is a one I'm trying to work on and this short is made to be the before credits ok here we go
You see the sonic under ground into but about the time it shows qween aleena sonic,manic and Sonia it
Go's to a door and bust open and you see silver and he says prepare to die iblis trigger pulls a laser gun points to sonic and the others then it's black 3 seconds later silver says perfect the end :Tails:
Edited by john jobs, Saturday Nov 2 2013, 09:44 PM.
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Thank you Recorderdude,

I would be fine with or without the Lumberjack song in that bit. Maybe having the mini boss just hum the song? The main idea was that this miniboss was only cutting trees and not really attacking Sonic or Tails: Like he was just minding his own business!

Only reason I included it the song was, well, because he's chopping trees. You're more than welcome to use or modify the idea as I'm no good at animating, myself.
Edited by FurryCMH, Friday Nov 1 2013, 09:03 PM.
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This is kind of a really short SEGA short idea. I tried animating myself, but I'm just talentless. Anyways, onto the idea.

It's a Christmas scene. The presents are neatly wrapped under the tree.

A soft Christmas song is playing in the background.

The camera slowly goes up the tree, revealing a perfectly decorated tree, until it stops at the top.

The top would reveal Ristar impaled by the Christmas Tree, instead of a regular Christmas Tree star.

Tell me what you think, or if I should change or add anything. Thanks in advance.
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AdmiralAntoine
Saturday Nov 2 2013, 10:36 AM
This is kind of a really short SEGA short idea. I tried animating myself, but I'm just talentless. Anyways, onto the idea.

It's a Christmas scene. The presents are neatly wrapped under the tree.

A soft Christmas song is playing in the background.

The camera slowly goes up the tree, revealing a perfectly decorated tree, until it stops at the top.

The top would reveal Ristar impaled by the Christmas Tree, instead of a regular Christmas Tree star.

Tell me what you think, or if I should change or add anything. Thanks in advance.
It's definitely one of those quick gag ideas, and I think it could work.
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A couple short ideas. Any feedback would be appreciated. Since I'm only a writer at this point, anyone who might like these ideas is free to use and modify them as they like:

1) Sonic speeds along the track in Resort Island in Sonic R. He speeds into a curve but fails to turn *classic "EERT!" sound effects as he tries to slow down, and crashes. (We can hear him hit a bunch of trash cans off "camera."

Tails speeds by and basically the same thing happens. Maybe a "w-w-woah!"

Then Eggman flies though the same curve on the egg mobile. "AAGH! TURN blast you!!!!!!" The egg mobile barely responds, and he quickly loses control. *CRASH!*

Those who have played Sonic R will know its a reference to the notoriously terrible controls of that game

Here is the URL for an image of the "scene."

http://img.gamefaqs.net/screens/b/a/e/gfs_42936_2_7.jpg

Here is a URL to the ideal background music: A non lyrical of Super Sonic Racing.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BD_rcYViHAE

2) (Tails is being tucked into bed and Bunnie is sitting beside the bed as Princess Sally looks on out the window)

Tails: That wolf sure is nasty huh Bunnie?
Bunnie: Nastier than a one-eyed snake, sugar!
(After half a second, Sally's eyelids draw open)

Forgive me in advance if that one has already been done. I don't believe it has, though some may consider it a "meme." If any animator likes this idea, I have a screenshot from that scene.


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Saturday Nov 2 2013, 11:23 AM
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Saturday Nov 2 2013, 10:36 AM
This is kind of a really short SEGA short idea. I tried animating myself, but I'm just talentless. Anyways, onto the idea.

It's a Christmas scene. The presents are neatly wrapped under the tree.

A soft Christmas song is playing in the background.

The camera slowly goes up the tree, revealing a perfectly decorated tree, until it stops at the top.

The top would reveal Ristar impaled by the Christmas Tree, instead of a regular Christmas Tree star.

Tell me what you think, or if I should change or add anything. Thanks in advance.
It's definitely one of those quick gag ideas, and I think it could work.
While I'm not fond of morbid stuff, it could be funnier if we have Ristar crying out 'oh the inhumanity!'
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POKEMON FOREVER!!!

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Sunday Nov 3 2013, 05:58 PM
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Saturday Nov 2 2013, 11:23 AM
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Saturday Nov 2 2013, 10:36 AM
This is kind of a really short SEGA short idea. I tried animating myself, but I'm just talentless. Anyways, onto the idea.

It's a Christmas scene. The presents are neatly wrapped under the tree.

A soft Christmas song is playing in the background.

The camera slowly goes up the tree, revealing a perfectly decorated tree, until it stops at the top.

The top would reveal Ristar impaled by the Christmas Tree, instead of a regular Christmas Tree star.

Tell me what you think, or if I should change or add anything. Thanks in advance.
It's definitely one of those quick gag ideas, and I think it could work.
While I'm not fond of morbid stuff, it could be funnier if we have Ristar crying out 'oh the inhumanity!'
I personally think that it would be better off silent
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Saturday Nov 2 2013, 10:36 AM
This is kind of a really short SEGA short idea. I tried animating myself, but I'm just talentless. Anyways, onto the idea.

It's a Christmas scene. The presents are neatly wrapped under the tree.

A soft Christmas song is playing in the background.

The camera slowly goes up the tree, revealing a perfectly decorated tree, until it stops at the top.

The top would reveal Ristar impaled by the Christmas Tree, instead of a regular Christmas Tree star.

Tell me what you think, or if I should change or add anything. Thanks in advance.
Personally I think impalement is a bit extreme, but I like the idea. Instead maybe you can just have Ristar on top of the tree looking extremely stressed, like the treetop got shoved up his - well y'know. It can still imply pain and gross stuff, but I think it would be better if the visual was somewhat left to the imagination. ;)
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