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Topic Started: Thursday Oct 30 2008, 12:19 PM (71,055 Views)
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This is my newest Song on NG, a nice orchestra version of Hidden Palace from S&K.
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KaDoYuu
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Very nice, Jacks! I suck at drawing people; this is really nice. :)
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Thanks guys =]

lolwut. More raping of the senses, purely for the hell of it <.< It's too fun, though. :ph43r:
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Haha, I like the beanman! :D

I have yet to master fbf...
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Thanks KaDoYuu! I find him really fun and easy to draw, so animating him is much of a blast. My FBF's not perfect really, it took a few tries to get the best inbetweens I could manage, without resorting to a tacky elongated one o__x That, and the first time I drew the raspberrying frames no one had the slightest clue what he was doing. XD
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:D I almost didn't, LOL
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What I have modeled so far:

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/180309/54164_dark_soul.JPG
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That's great Griffin, I can't model to save my life so I don't know how to help on it but it looks as though it's coming along well. Is that 3D studio Max? My tutor never told us how to put references up like that :(

Tera:

# It seems you're directly transferring elements of your older drawings- from two of your 'metal' Sonic attempts (one with the clenches fists RGX helped you with, and one with the exact feet from your final version). Try and loosen it up a bit, imagine different poses. Sketch figures from a magazine you find lying around the house or something, try to imitate different poses and think about how to use them yourself.

# Tails' eyes do not look like that, that's more Sonicy. His eyes are big but they are separate.

# Tails' ears look pretty flat to me. Also one is bigger than the other. They seem to be propped on his forehead and lack support on his head. You should also shape the head a bit, i.e his head is not perfectly round.

# Tails' body appears too big. His chest fur should also cover more of his body.

Hope this is useful. Also, I suggest you crop your image's white space down, and enlargen Tails (not in that order); he looks very small.
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here is a old picture i drew of one of my friends OC's http://the-real-iceman.deviantart.com/art/...ried-2-88845791

the thing that makes this one of my best works yet is that it was such an improvement of my style, if you look through my gallery you can see what i mean Posted Image
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Here's a bit of critizim, please don't take it too harsh, only trying to help you get better. ;)

He seems to be very stiff Tera, try to loosen him up a bit. His arms and legs hang like they weight a ton.

What may help, as Jacks said, is too imagine him in different poses. What may help is using reference images and try to copy the pose of the person in that image.

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After that, just imagine your character in that pose and draw what they would look like over top. I was too lazy to draw the next step cause that actually takes some time.




Also the image is sorta disporportioned (is that how you spell it?).

-Tails body isn't really perfectly oval or round shaped.

-His back ear is actually facing inwards/towards his head, and not out away from it.

-His arm that is going up, is coming from his chest (i think) instead of his shoulder. Also the hand that's going up is smaller than the one going down, and it's a circle.

-His tail of the right side, the one wipping downwards, it too striaght at the joint, try to make it flow/curve from the beginning to the end of the tail so make an effect of movement.

-I can't really think of anything else at the moment.
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http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/190309/43532_redlinetera.png

Not technically a redline, but anyway I hope this helps a bit.

Sorry if my drawings are a little rough around the edges, artist block FTL.
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Jacks....you are amazing!

And you did that so quickly too, I'm impressed.

This looks very helpful.
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Wow, Jacks. That is amazingly detailed. Awesome job on that.
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http://fc70.deviantart.com/fs45/i/2009/077...asisDesigns.png

Made it in my spare time yesterday. It's not 100% accurate, but it's good enough :)

Just noticed the file name dA has given it - 'Exaclibur'. Why? I have no idea.
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Just a quick question, having never played BK.

Can sonic actually move in that thing.....

as well as:
-talk
-breath
-urinate? (actually, what if he had to go?)

Can you imagined if he tried spin dashing in that....ouch. Also he seems pretty strong to hold that sword one handed like that, lol.

But altogether, it's a nice picture Stasis.
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